Comments : Being with her

  • 18 years ago

    by kei

    The over all feeling was great! ! ! and i really liked it, and it was a wonderful choice of words.
    smooches
    kei

  • 18 years ago

    by sarahcide

    This is a good poem, and it is well written. It's full of meaning, and I love it because of that. Keep on writing those poems, you are really good at it.

    4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by dee

    Hey..great poem. i love the last line.. keep up the good work
    dee

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenny

    Wow...that is another awsome poem. keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenny

    Awww....i like this one ... keep it up
    Jennifer