I thought this poem was really good, and I love the repitition. |
by Efrelinda
What a poem, man!!!!!!! |
This poem was so touching. I kinda feel the same way on many of the things you mentioned. 5/5 i LOVED IT!! Hey i dont know if u remember me...we used to talk alot a couple years ago in the chat room w/ people like joker and lorna...but if u dont its okay. Just wanted to c how u were doing! Take care. |
by xo kisses xo
This poem is very well written. |
Awww! that was a beautiful poem. |
Beautifully written. Bravo! |
Beautiful. The rhythm flows very well, good job :) |
by My Name Is Mouse
Every word you wrote, I agree with. These days people recall love when they get together at the young age of 11 or so. What would they know about love, and therefore what would I? |
by Scarlet Letter
Wow....... This is me... this is my life .... i love him but i can't tell him)= i'm of young age but atleast i know what true love is!!! |
No problem with the repetition of " so I'll guess you'll never know" because it is the way it goes.. |
Bravo. |