So Sick

by Wasted Fake Smiles   May 19, 2006


I'm so sick of life, so sick of pain,
So sick of being forced to walk in the rain.
So sick of heartbreak, so sick of you,
Sick of the dreams my head makes all night through.

I thought you cared, but now I'm so sick,
You said you loved me, but changed your mind quick.
So sick of sadness, so sick of my tears,
Thought you came to save me from my fears.

Thanks for the extra stress you've added on,
Because I'm still so sick and sad that you're gone.
Have a nice life, say hi to your new girlfriend for me,
Soon she'll be so sick too, I know you agree.

~*Who Cares?*~

(Written for Contest..yeah right! I haven't had a boyfriend in 10 months!:()

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenna Balkin

    Aww....that was a good poem!
    What place did you get in the contest for it??
    I bet it was a good one!! lol Well it would have been if i was judgeing anyway :P
    Great poem!

    Jen
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  • 18 years ago

    by Ye Seul

    Aww... I feel so sad after reading this poem. It is very well written and I like your style of writing. Good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. that was very good, there was so much emotion in it and i just loved the repeating of "so sick" ! keep up the excellent work!
    jessy xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Stacy

    I like this poem,... in my opinion it was alot better then what I write... 10 points for you.... ;0)

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Good write...you could have been more deep and descriptive about the feelings involved with the topic, though I guess its difficult when as you mentioned you havent had a boo in a while and your not experiencing those emotions yourself...Still I enjoyed it the first two stanzas mainly had great flow...Nice write
    Eirisa

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