Good write...you could have been more deep and descriptive about the feelings involved with the topic, though I guess its difficult when as you mentioned you havent had a boo in a while and your not experiencing those emotions yourself...Still I enjoyed it the first two stanzas mainly had great flow...Nice write
Eirisa

I like this poem,... in my opinion it was alot better then what I write... 10 points for you.... ;0)

Wow.. that was very good, there was so much emotion in it and i just loved the repeating of "so sick" ! keep up the excellent work!
jessy xox

Aww... I feel so sad after reading this poem. It is very well written and I like your style of writing. Good job!

Aww....that was a good poem!
What place did you get in the contest for it??
I bet it was a good one!! lol Well it would have been if i was judgeing anyway :P
Great poem!

Jen
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