Comments : Lose Weight The Elvis Way (Acrostic)

  • 18 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Very nice joe
    keep writting
    good luck

  • 18 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    LOL I did not see that it was a funny poem until I started reading it. Very good Abs, made me laugh and its Acrostic!! Awesome work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 work 5/5 very funny...lol

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I like the original material of this - it certainly made me giggle. You pulled off a difficult style especialy with such a long title.
    Love the final stanza.