My one and only

by Brittney   May 19, 2006


My love for you has never been so strong

everyday,i know it will last that much longer

for every time i see you..i still get those same butterflies in my stomach

my knees get little bit weaker with every sweet kiss that lays upon my lips

your in my dreams..my fantasies..what can i do to make you see?

your all that i want
all that i need

what we have baby..it's more then just love

it's that "can't eat,can't sleep,reach for the stars" kind of things

for you are my night
and my day

my wish..my hope..my one and only

-brittneylinn
comment please..let me know how im doing..and ill be sure to return the favor..hey..a little criticism never hurts anyone:)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey Hun, well i thought it was good so i gave it a 4/5. Ummmm criticism ummm maybe work on the flow a little better, but i think its good and i can see u have really thought and shared all your feelings into this so keep it up. :)