Heart, Mind, Body

The first thing that caught my attention when I read this peice. Was the way you've structered it. I loved it. Your rhyme scheme was also very good. I'm amazed by this piece. Especially more because of all the emotions, which I'm sure everybody could relate to. Awesome job. Keep it up.

Natalie``

It seems you are emotion distressed. I can read it in your poems, there is a low of raw emotion. Very well written poem. Keep it up.

Bravo! Welcome to my favorites. I loved every poem that I read of yours. You have such a wonderful talent. This poem was short, simple, but to the point. You took meaningless words and turned them into a wonderful picture. 5/5

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Letty

Great poem, but is the tittle suppose to be Heat? or Heart? Mind, Body 5/5

Very Interesting write..
Something different.
Keep up the good Work!