Comments : Heart, Mind, Body

  • 18 years ago

    by silent eyes

    I love your poem, I love all your poems keep writing ~silent eyes~

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    This is a very good pom. unique form and i love the scheme! it was a very emotional poem w/ a grrt author....thx soooo much for all ur comments, u av no idea how much they mean to me.
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Cinderalla

    Hello! Thx for all ur comments! This is my favourite poem...its so sad and raw..haha..ur kind of right actually..my poems were based on real feelings..thx for ur encouragement...Take the same advice if yours are based on ur feelings too..haha..write more..stay happy! =))

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosie

    Tammie thx for u'r comments on my poems!!! I read some of yours to i realy liked them. I look foward to reading more of u'r poems. Keep up the good work!

    sign,
    Rosie

  • 18 years ago

    by cuppycake

    Ok,this is an example of an AMAZING short poem. I loved how it was spilt up into three categories but kept a strong poetic hold. I really loved it.
    JBN

  • 18 years ago

    by GreenxTea

    Oo, i love it. i haven't read a poem like that in a long time, it was nice to read. well, the idea is sad, but it was very well written. nice work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Very Interesting write..
    Something different.
    Keep up the good Work!

  • 18 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Great poem, but is the tittle suppose to be Heat? or Heart? Mind, Body 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Bravo! Welcome to my favorites. I loved every poem that I read of yours. You have such a wonderful talent. This poem was short, simple, but to the point. You took meaningless words and turned them into a wonderful picture. 5/5

    Love
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    It seems you are emotion distressed. I can read it in your poems, there is a low of raw emotion. Very well written poem. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    The first thing that caught my attention when I read this peice. Was the way you've structered it. I loved it. Your rhyme scheme was also very good. I'm amazed by this piece. Especially more because of all the emotions, which I'm sure everybody could relate to. Awesome job. Keep it up.

    Natalie``