by silent eyes
I love your poem, I love all your poems keep writing ~silent eyes~ |
This is a very good pom. unique form and i love the scheme! it was a very emotional poem w/ a grrt author....thx soooo much for all ur comments, u av no idea how much they mean to me. |
by Cinderalla
Hello! Thx for all ur comments! This is my favourite poem...its so sad and raw..haha..ur kind of right actually..my poems were based on real feelings..thx for ur encouragement...Take the same advice if yours are based on ur feelings too..haha..write more..stay happy! =)) |
by Rosie
Tammie thx for u'r comments on my poems!!! I read some of yours to i realy liked them. I look foward to reading more of u'r poems. Keep up the good work! |
by cuppycake
Ok,this is an example of an AMAZING short poem. I loved how it was spilt up into three categories but kept a strong poetic hold. I really loved it. |
by GreenxTea
Oo, i love it. i haven't read a poem like that in a long time, it was nice to read. well, the idea is sad, but it was very well written. nice work! |
by Misstress
Very Interesting write.. |
Great poem, but is the tittle suppose to be Heat? or Heart? Mind, Body 5/5 |
by Letty
Bravo! Welcome to my favorites. I loved every poem that I read of yours. You have such a wonderful talent. This poem was short, simple, but to the point. You took meaningless words and turned them into a wonderful picture. 5/5 |
by Darien
It seems you are emotion distressed. I can read it in your poems, there is a low of raw emotion. Very well written poem. Keep it up. |
by Natalie
The first thing that caught my attention when I read this peice. Was the way you've structered it. I loved it. Your rhyme scheme was also very good. I'm amazed by this piece. Especially more because of all the emotions, which I'm sure everybody could relate to. Awesome job. Keep it up. |