by BlueDreams May 19, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
family
My sadness I writes today |
by Mr M
Excellently sad Bert.... |
Such a sad poem =[ a wonderful peice of writing, you have a gifted talent. 5/5 |
by Brooke Amity
I fear this every day about my wayward sister, although i do not have belief in that better place to comfort me. |
by jess
Hey this is a gr8 poem not like the actual poem but the writing of it ..it makes me think of when my oldest sister was diein with luekimia i wished and wished she would betta but yeh i understand how u r feeling so if u eva wanna talk and u have msn u can add me on jec_devil01@hot..n i will try my best to help u through this tough time becos i no what it feels like to loose ur world so yeh...take care xxxjes |
I feel so sadden by your poem, i really hope things are ok for you, your poem cntains so much sadness that could only be acheived from real life experiance, its a great write but im sorry to hear what caused it, well done tho 5/5...beautiful |