Holy!!!!! That was the most exotic/beautiful poem that I have ever read!!!!!! That was totally gorgeaus!!!! I loved it!!!!
yours in peace
Mercy(Mercedes)

Thanks Mercy im happy that u love the poem
xox-bev

This is really good i like it. 5/5

Mallori

Wow that was really great by the way thank you for your comment on my poem i just wanted to give back something since you made your opinion on miine i was looking for a poem to critique and i came upon this one i loved it, it is my favorite
i hope other people will look at mine and think the same as i do about this poem it has beauty in the way you give the reader details about what is happening in this poem
i hope i will learn to give off my emotions as you did here