Your Mistake

by Bridgette   May 19, 2006


Leaving behind your future
Unable to face your past
You're stuck in the middle
Trying to make this last

You're caught in the difference
Between right and wrong
Seeing things less clearly
But still trying to stay strong

Struggling between feelings
Of love and of hate
Trying to fight against
Your very own fate

Pretending you're happy
When you are really sad
Decision still unclear
Of what's good and bad

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  • 18 years ago

    by girl who wrote this stuff

    Hey this was real good. i can relate to it a lot rightnow. keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jess

    I love this poem, its really good, and i can definitely relate at the moment. sometimes everything just seems so hard, i'm sure you'll work it out, give it time xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenTessa

    Well, I think that everyone has days like that. When they just cant deside, on stupid things. Or whether or not they hate who they are, or love who they are. But not very many ppl love who they are, anyways. Good job, I really liked this one

  • 18 years ago

    by BROKEN AND TORN

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  • 18 years ago

    by BROKEN AND TORN

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