Hey long time no see, this is a really good poem and you should write more!!!!!

Love Leona

I really like it, even if it is really sadd.

Short but good. 5/5. keep writing.

Thank you everyone for your comments

This is by far my favorite poem you have written

I feel nothing inside
there's no where to hide
as my eyes water like a rising tide
i realize no ones on my side.
^^^^fav. part

keep up the good work

I really like ur poem........5/5 from me

Thats so sad :(:(

ill b on your side
xxx

YouR stylE oF writinG iS aN enjoyablE topiC. aN excellenT piecE oF worK thaT attracteD mY sinceritY verY mucH...

thiS iS luzaN froM NZ