Black Pit

by vanessa hill   May 19, 2006


Everythings flashing in front of me. I see it spinning.
It makes me sick. I can no longer breathe.
My head feels like its going to burst.

I seem to be falling in a whole. Where theres not bottom.
I need help. Who'll help me?
I'm in a pit, the pit is covering me.
The light no longer shows.
I'm in a black whole with no end.
The pit of blackness scares me but I'm falling in and i can not stop anywhere.

Its a black whole of sadness that want go away.. The black pit is nothing but a feeling. A feeling that goes on forever.

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