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by Sarah Ann May 19, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
To stay here is a vast burden Already imprinted in my mind I need to leave this lonely road Who knows what I could find The distance will be plenty But our hearts are always close And maybe this will be better In greater terms, who knows? You keep on walking, shining Illuminate the world with light My soul reflects the darkened, Frightening elements at night This world has no place for me Existence here was His mistake And I should undo all this wrong, My worthy promise I must break I'm sorry friends and family If you understand then let me go The pain here is of huge amount And so, nothing to you I owe I can't do what you're asking for I simply don't have what you need And I can't put forth this effort You are successful, so proceed
by Russell
Very nice poem...amazing imagery and it flows great....you've got a ton of talent..keep on writing 5/5
by Toni
This poem is beautiful i love it, i hope you manage to hang on xxx