by Sarah Ann May 19, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I don't want to fall in love |
Its a very nice poem...but you must realize...not every one who is heart broken is heart broken intentionally...most ppl feel really bad afterwards...but in order to be happy..some one else must pay the price..its impossible to keep every one happy...people are sometimes forced to make decisions they end up regreting..but its what happens...me personally think the ppl who break ppls hearts daily and for the heck of it should pay al right.....this is a very nice poem....i can understand it....5/5 |
by Jessica
Aww.. that was very good, and very unique! keep up the excellent work! 5/5 |
by Kaylee
Unique take on a poem. I actually like this one and if you read comments leave for people it is rare I'll tell anybody that. It just seemed to flow right maybe except for this line. I suggest maybe just taking the second 'I" out: |