Unique take on a poem. I actually like this one and if you read comments leave for people it is rare I'll tell anybody that. It just seemed to flow right maybe except for this line. I suggest maybe just taking the second 'I" out:
"I promise, I won't let it happen so"
Otherwise it really is an enjoable read not really cliche love poem style but rather the true pain and not wanting to fall in love after heartbreak.

Aww.. that was very good, and very unique! keep up the excellent work! 5/5
jessy xox

Its a very nice poem...but you must realize...not every one who is heart broken is heart broken intentionally...most ppl feel really bad afterwards...but in order to be happy..some one else must pay the price..its impossible to keep every one happy...people are sometimes forced to make decisions they end up regreting..but its what happens...me personally think the ppl who break ppls hearts daily and for the heck of it should pay al right.....this is a very nice poem....i can understand it....5/5
take care

~David M~