No Longer There When You Cry

I now wt u mean bput the friendship samer thing happened to me except it was more complicated then that, way more. anyway i just wanna say i love this poem and well ur other poems aswell.

Wow, very emotional! good job! i think you could improve it a bit by adding a bit more about your friendship and what you used to do, before you start talking about how it was ruined! great poem though!

Then you discard me unneeded
with the wink of his eye
uncaring to my feelings
where are you when I cry

This really hit home for me Luanne..HARD...especially the stanza above ^^...I'm so scared to lose my best friend over a guy..everytime she gets a boyfriend I feel like she gets so wrapped up in him and its non-stop about the guy and never once does she ask how things are going with me...like last year when my parents were going through a rough time I was miserable and she had a man and I cried all the time and I felt like I had no one..to me..since I haven't been in love yet...Loseing a friendship is one of the worst things to feel! I'm just scared I'll be writing the same things when I get older but trying so hard to hang on to our friendship

I'm sorry a friend left you over a man momma! I bet she regrets it now that she doesn't have you to turn to!
Wonderful Write
Love A.I.D

Beautifully written, so much emotion. It's very hard losing a friend. So sad to see. An exceptionally wonderful write.