Beautifully written, so much emotion. It's very hard losing a friend. So sad to see. An exceptionally wonderful write.

Then you discard me unneeded
with the wink of his eye
uncaring to my feelings
where are you when I cry

This really hit home for me Luanne..HARD...especially the stanza above ^^...I'm so scared to lose my best friend over a guy..everytime she gets a boyfriend I feel like she gets so wrapped up in him and its non-stop about the guy and never once does she ask how things are going with me...like last year when my parents were going through a rough time I was miserable and she had a man and I cried all the time and I felt like I had no one..to me..since I haven't been in love yet...Loseing a friendship is one of the worst things to feel! I'm just scared I'll be writing the same things when I get older but trying so hard to hang on to our friendship

I'm sorry a friend left you over a man momma! I bet she regrets it now that she doesn't have you to turn to!
Wonderful Write
Love A.I.D

Wow, very emotional! good job! i think you could improve it a bit by adding a bit more about your friendship and what you used to do, before you start talking about how it was ruined! great poem though!

I now wt u mean bput the friendship samer thing happened to me except it was more complicated then that, way more. anyway i just wanna say i love this poem and well ur other poems aswell.