by Wasted Fake Smiles May 19, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
She watches as they slowly, lower the casket, |
Good poem, lol i should hope you weren't married. The poem flowed fantastically and you captured a lot of the emotions of the wife perfectly, I'd know i've been through a similar situation however lol i was not married. But well done on an amazingly moving poem, i enjoyed it! |
by holly
I liked this a good story though the last few stanza it kinda loses the flow and a few of the rhymes dont really work like question and reaction dont rhyme |
I loved the way u potrayed ur piece of imagination here, its really an ultimate poem |
by Latasha
I had to comment on this poem, i read in a contest, and it brang tears to my eyes, as i know so many people who dont think about what could happen, but rather react... very touching... |
Very Very good poem, i have no words. |