Very Very good poem, i have no words.
5/5 keep your chin up
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I had to comment on this poem, i read in a contest, and it brang tears to my eyes, as i know so many people who dont think about what could happen, but rather react... very touching...
is it true?
5/5

I loved the way u potrayed ur piece of imagination here, its really an ultimate poem

all the best and take care
5/5

I liked this a good story though the last few stanza it kinda loses the flow and a few of the rhymes dont really work like question and reaction dont rhyme
otherwise a great poem xxALLYxx

Good poem, lol i should hope you weren't married. The poem flowed fantastically and you captured a lot of the emotions of the wife perfectly, I'd know i've been through a similar situation however lol i was not married. But well done on an amazingly moving poem, i enjoyed it!