This poem was different but good all the same. I'm liking your writing style. Your vocab was stronger then most that I've rea don this site and you can easily tell a story without bumps along the way. The only line I had trouble with was this one because two words had "doing" in them. One with it and one by itself:
Wrongdoing and right doing

Aww.. thats so sweet.. your feelings really shined through there! good job!
jessy xox

That was really well written. It was good, and sweet and the feelings that you expressed semeed real and alive. well done
xxxxx

I actually laughed at this. Not because it was bad, or even a funny poem. It just reminded me when I once had a crush on a teacher a few years back. Good poem. Well done! x