I really like this poem.
I liked how you used contrast in a sence where its talking about a soft and delicate beautiful smelling flower and a cold hard shiney blade.
5/5 [comment and vote on my poems please and thank you.]

O wow.. that was so good! i loved how you compared yourself to a rose.. thats so pretty.. just a few lil mistakes..

Another pedal falls from the rose...
^ in this line, pedal is actually spelled petal

and

As the black rose lay there in solitude...
^ in this line there should be a "s" after lay

but other than that it was great! keep up the excellent work! 5/5

Haha i feel like a dumb @$$ i fixed my errors lol

Haha i feel like a dumb @$$ i fixed my errors lol

Ah, I love this poem. Its so strong..