by Sabrina[Spud] May 19, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Breaking in my silence; |
by Roxy
Thats great wow!! i just realised i commented this poem as my old name (roxy) lol cool |
by Love Panda
Very deep-it really moved me..... |
by Roxy
WoW!! thats somehow very deep ina lovey sort of way i realy liked it you can compare alot with me in this poem lol i lvoe it so nice and gentle i love the way u described your feelings and you tryed to let it go i feel like im in your shoes it seem like its happen to me good goign xoxroxyxox |
Ooo i totally like it keep up the good work~brittness |
by Fixxxer
It's like your writing off the top of your head the way your feelings are expressed so clearly... yet the rhyming scheme is still spectacular. 5/5 great poem |