by firexflys May 19, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
IT'S EMPTY AGAIN |
by Vanessa Lea
I feel exactly like this sometimes......Great work...I love someone who can say exactly how I feel....5/5 |
Omg hunni this is amazing i love it sooo much urs soo talented.....5/5...babes keep it up xxx |
by Renee Kotva
I'm appauled at the beauty of this poem, you wrote it very well. |
by aaron 1 remo
Really nice ideas portried here! great job : ) my only critisism would be stanza 5 where you have repeated the words 'my self' and in stanza 6 where it didn't flow as well as the rest of the peom but overall a fantastic poem |
by MemoirsOfMe
It was really deep and I like how the story progressed to the end. 5/5 |