It's empty again

by firexflys   May 19, 2006


IT'S EMPTY AGAIN

I grab that bottle on the side of my bed
To drown out every last word you said
As I drink my self to sleep tonight
I wonder if you're alright

As I finish the first I go to the next
How did everything get so complex?
This drink in my head hasn't solved a thing
And I know this bottles emptiness is approaching

I want some more as I walk the edge
I feel my self so close to the ledge
I feel the wind across my face
But nothing can save me from the beer case

As I go back for more
I feel as though I can soar
I garb that rail with my hand
And I don't think, but I hope you understand

As I feel my self falling down
I can see my self hitting the ground
And the wind blows my tears
As I know I've become my bigest fear

As I wake up from this dream
And really wanna scream
i feel the tears being to fall
and I can recall it all

I wish I was back there
Falling in the air
And I wish I was with all that beer
Back where I said good-bye my dear.

©Written by fireXfly

R/R/C i'll do the same.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa Lea

    I feel exactly like this sometimes......Great work...I love someone who can say exactly how I feel....5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by PatheticLittleGirlxx

    Omg hunni this is amazing i love it sooo much urs soo talented.....5/5...babes keep it up xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee Kotva

    I'm appauled at the beauty of this poem, you wrote it very well.
    best wishes
    God Bless
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron 1 remo

    Really nice ideas portried here! great job : ) my only critisism would be stanza 5 where you have repeated the words 'my self' and in stanza 6 where it didn't flow as well as the rest of the peom but overall a fantastic poem
    Aaron (remo)

  • 18 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    It was really deep and I like how the story progressed to the end. 5/5