Love you Till the End

by Marlena   May 19, 2006


I will love you till the end
To you, my heart I will send
Wrapped in ribbons and bows
With lots of X's and o's

I love you, I love you
It's all very true.
Hold and love me every day of the week
Don't bother acting embarresed or meak

I treasure every word you say,
And the way you protect me in every single way
So, don't let Alec north get in your way
Come and hold me every single day.

My heart is yours in every single way
Kisses and hugs everyday
I will love you till our deaths
The day we take our very last breaths

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Good peice, welll written and nicely expressed. only critism i have id that "muse" and "you" do not really rhyme.. unless it is just my accent which prevents them from doing...

    anyway good peice

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    You repeat ever too often by a bit. The first stanza was different and cute but it just sort of became too repetitive towards the ending. It was okay though and like I said I liked how different the first stanza was/felt.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brigitte

    That was amazing for your very first poem!! Keep writting hon!

    Much love
    Brigitte

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