Yea....i can relate to that. :(

Its such a great poem ;) I loved the way u put the words together ;) good work ;), check out my poem called Never Good Enough Im sure u can relate to it ;).

Fay

Hey...
that was a really really awesome poem, you put all ur sorrows, pain, tears, and anger, into this one little poem.. and that takes sooo much talent... good work 5/5... good luck in the future.. and im sry that u had to go through that.. i know its hard.. i go through it all the time...

p.s. check out my poems.. i have some good ones that im proud of.. like... dear diary.. and she.. those are some good ones.. but i have other ones too comment on some if ya'd like it would make my day!!!!

This is an excellent poem , and i understand your pain.... keep up writing love skye xoxo

I no how it feels to trust someone and them tell u stupid lies and u belive them and you get hur in the end it sucks but we all go through it

Wow what a lovely poem! Keep up the great work!! GBU! Pepa

It really is a good poem, Keep up the writing.

__Living__

I lioved your poem
it was great

Sad poem, i like the line:
You knocked them down and said NO WAY!
You made me believe I wasn't good enough!