Hi, you want him bad or back..? This is not understood.
2nd paragraph anyone treat why not 'me' instead of 'my', I thought you meant 'mine' Isn't it?
3rd paragraph, he just dosn't not don't understand....
5th paragraph, The girl he feels not fell ...
6th paragraph come again why you said with...I just want this boy so 'bad' what you meant 'bad' you want a bad boy? why?
The whole written was not really like a poem. It is only a love letter/message sending to send it someone whom you are in loved secretly!