Comments : A True Poet.

  • 18 years ago

    by sfiawong

    There are some abnormal not like words apearing but I could not edit them my self. How could I do?

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    There are several site errors within this peice which really need addressing as it takes much away from a peice when the reader has to stop in order to make out a word. but ignoreing these the peice is good.

    "He can write everything into a poem like" I really don't like this line... cannot really explain why but interupted the peices flow terriabally.

    the content of this peice is good, clear and descriptive with a lot of good points. the structure is also well defined and the flow for the most part is very smooth