Very expressive peice with some good descriptions and well portrayed concepts.

"I dream of you
And when I wake
And realize it was all a dream"
^this part seems slightly weaker than the rest of the peice, but it quickly recovers again in the next stanza and doesn't take much away from the overall peice.

Okay here are 7 words to describe that poem & the way it made me feel while i was reading it.. alright? okay here goes:::

*amazing
*speechless
*creative
*original
*unique
*unreal
*wonderful
*rhythm

***I really, really enjoyed reading this poem***

**meggie**

Oops my bad.. ^^^^8 words lol....

**meggie**

Oops my bad.. ^^^^8 words lol....

**meggie**