Dan, you have out-done yourself. one of ur very best! i really really liked it. it made me feel very misunderstood and somehow part of the poem. very kool.
: ) Suzie

Wow, is one of the biggest times this word has come out my mouth, both on your poems. But you really point it out how us people feel. I wish i could write it like you do, but i cant...so i respect the fact that you put it out there and able to show people how we feel. thanks, 5/5, but its worth a LOT more.

One of the best ones I've red yet. Keep it up.

Truly,
RLS

Thanks for the comment
i like this one it shows alot of feeling in it in just a few lines
keep up the good work
your doing great

=bianca=