Oh, Luanne...this is beautiful! It gave me chills.
I adore this poem from beginning to end, well done!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

That was was lovely, it was really sad but it was still loving and was a perfect poem.
well done
xxxx

An ultimate piece, I really loved this poem of yours. Great write with a great flow, and it was very heartfelt. Well done! And thanks for your comment on mine.

Woah... that one tugged my heart a lot and nearly threw my emotions right off. It's not going to take much tonight for me to shed a few tears :)

Beautiful write, so meaningful. A very good write as always Luanne.

Omg! that is amazing.. that made me cry so hard! awww.. very very very good job on this! there was so much emotion, good descriptions, and it flowed well.. this poem is definetely a 10/5! i looveed it! there were just a few spelling errors and such, but that doesn't matter with a poem this good!

Now why did you have to go and do that...making all emotional and stuff!! HAHAHA

Wow...I didn't think the poem would end the way it did...that was creative...awesomely awesome!! lol You're writing always surprises me...I always know it's going to be good but I never expect what I get...You're amazing! This is such a good write!! :) I hope you're doing well!!!!!! Take Care!

Simple... yet amazing... 5/5