Impressive write, and best of luck in the contest. Strangly I've read this before but heaven knows why I didn't comment...
The second line of the second stanza really stood out to me. I liked your use of language and descriptions though out, very powerful. The last line was very sad and sinister and gave a strong ending.
Well done.

Whow that was sooo good!!
You're truly a great writer
Xx

Good poem... i liked it a lot