Wow, such a wonderful poem and it flowed great! Thank you for your comment.

Great flow o this peice, no rough areas at all. the structure and content are fantastically composed and the meaning of the peice clear but not too forced upon the reader.

5/5

Somehow this one seems to be ur story & all i could say is all the very best in which ever u lead ur life.

beautifully expressed poem
take care
5/5

I think you write this poem really well i think you made a mis sell on this one hehe.

Now the pushed her so far, they had to pay the prize.

Apart from that...good job.

I remember reading this in a contest once :)
I liked it then and I like it now! 5/5!

Jen
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Wow, that was very powerful and very good! i loved it :) it flowed well, and it sent across a good message! there was only one mistake that i could find ::

Now the pushed her so far, they had to pay the prize.
^ in this line, "prize" is meant to be spelled "price" hehe..

excellent poem! keep it up! 5/5

Interesting. some of the couplets were uneven. but nice job!