by Lisa May 20, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
A terrible disaster, |
You made me cry thank you for that poem it was great |
Very, very, very good. This is one of the best poems of this type Ive ever read. |
by Timothy r
Your heart doesnt seem to wander far from devastation, such a beautifully worded poem, wonderful in every instance. T |
Great peice, your descriptions and portrayals are wonderfully clear. it has agood flow and structure too. not much i can say by way of critism really as it is a very well written peice |
by Kaylee
I would suggest just making the title lowercase. Otherwise, it was truly a sad day and still is. Always remember 9-11 |