One Goal

by Sean Dohr   May 20, 2006


When put on this earth,
we were given one goal,
to perfect life on our own,
to look deep in our souls.

To surpass all challenges,
in life's long, tiring trip.
To believe in our journey,
and minimize the slips.

A common misconception,
that most humans believe,
is that we live for ourselves,
not to give, but receive.

A disaster of character,
that we are all subject to,
hopefully you are unique,
one, in a country of few.

Before we leave earth,
many disasters will strike,
it's the way we react,
that will save future lives.

And when darkness falls,
will you find the light?
Or sit in the back row,
just to keep out of sight?

Will you follow the path,
that you've always known?
Or be risky and daring,
and do things on your own?

It's the character flaws,
and the wasted breath,
that stop us from acting,
and will lead us to death.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    I love your poems, they are so organized and makes you think

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow, this give u sumthin 2 think about. loved it keep up the gr8 work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    You did a great job on this. It definitely gives you something to think about and everything you wrote in this was so true. Great job on this! Hopefully, people will read this and take in consideration some of the things that you said. It sends out a very powerful message. Great job on this!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Woww.. that was so deep.. it really made me think! another brilliant piece of writing! it flowed nicely and i couldn't even notice the words you put in for the contest, they just blended in so well! good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Is this for that one contest? Excellent work trying tog et your message across. I know how hard it is try try and get those words involved in the poem. Good luck by the way.

    to perfect life on our own,
    to look deep in our souls.
    ^^If you read this it either means one goal to search inside to prefect our own lives or two separate goals which shows how people can see different things with reading.

    it's the way we react,
    that will save future lives.
    ^^I don't know what you mean by this. Do you mean the lives we have as in different stages of our life?

    Either way again goodluck this was a really good poem.

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