Is this for that one contest? Excellent work trying tog et your message across. I know how hard it is try try and get those words involved in the poem. Good luck by the way.

to perfect life on our own,
to look deep in our souls.
^^If you read this it either means one goal to search inside to prefect our own lives or two separate goals which shows how people can see different things with reading.

it's the way we react,
that will save future lives.
^^I don't know what you mean by this. Do you mean the lives we have as in different stages of our life?

Either way again goodluck this was a really good poem.

Woww.. that was so deep.. it really made me think! another brilliant piece of writing! it flowed nicely and i couldn't even notice the words you put in for the contest, they just blended in so well! good job!

You did a great job on this. It definitely gives you something to think about and everything you wrote in this was so true. Great job on this! Hopefully, people will read this and take in consideration some of the things that you said. It sends out a very powerful message. Great job on this!

Wow, this give u sumthin 2 think about. loved it keep up the gr8 work 5/5

I love your poems, they are so organized and makes you think