by PS May 20, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
My eyes burn at the thought of you |
I like how the poem doesn't rhyme but still has flow, hard to do nice job 5/5 |
by xxmichaelxx
Wow, how can ppl write a poem that's non-rhyming and make it still great! |
Nice connotative langauge, I love the wording.' |
by Biscuit
Teh words are good but the rhythm/ structure could do with a bit of work to make it more powerful xx |