The last line is something you should do "BE PROUD TO BE YOURSELF" even tho i have not seen a pic of you I'm sure your beautiful on the inside and the out just keep your head up you got good talent on your hands girl e-mail me sometime 5/5

Zoe this is such a brilliant poem...sad because its about not being able to accept yourself for who you are, and not having confidence.....I think its wonderful...well done.

If this poem is about you then you shouldn't think your ugly.. its the inside that matters and its the inside that god sees and loves the beauty for.. god sees you as the person you are and not the peron you look like. keep tht in mind. good poem tho =]

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Amazing poem.. i can really relate to it... its amazing. ur a great and talented writer.. keep on writing!

~ angie

Hey zoe girl i no exactly how u feel i hate the way i look ma figure and my face but u now us girls worry to much** lol we have to keep our heads up high and try to gain some self condedence i mean ur writing is beautifull i havent seen u but i bet ur beautifull like every one eles in the world.....**keep smiling** **hugs zoe** dont worry k xxx dd xxx P.S gr8 poem very gd 5/5 well done...:) keep it up

HEYY GURL I REALLY LOVED YO POEM IT IS REAL AND MAYB SOMEDAY U CAN REACH OUT AN TELL PEOPLE OUT THERE WHO ARE INCECURE OF THEMSELVES...TO ME EVERYBODYS BEAUTIFUL...DOENST MATTER THA SIZE LOOKS AR WHATEVER EVRYBODYS BEAUTIFUL