Very nice poem! It was exactly what someone would write to me...someone I know. It sounded exactly like a situation I'm going through right now. But just know that even though you say you can't live without her sometimes you have to try. You are suppose to live for God. I'm not sure if your religious or not and sorry if i offended you. But very nice poem. Keep up the good work! GBU!
Pepa

There were alot of mistakes in this poem. You misspelled 'Cause or...well, I don't really knwo hwo to spell it, but I know cos aint right. And you should capitalize your I's.

Wow, Nice Poem, I love it..

Well Catherine as it says in my poem

"Im not perfect, i know
I make mistakes"

Cos is shortened for because..
and my i's are suppose to be like that..
Grammar is not what u should be looking at, its the poem..

Wow!!!!! i really really loved this poem, keep it up!!!!

I love it its very good