Comments : I Want to Take You

  • 18 years ago

    by Pepa

    Wow, I surely know that feeling. I am going through the same thing with someone right now. And I really liked the last line "Take you right now,if I knew that I could". That spoke EXACTLY what I was thinking and going through. Beautiful work! GBU!
    Pepa

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Very good reading and to the point. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa25

    Wow! im speech less