I love that, nice structure and rhyme sceme and i think there was some sort of message about cutting yourself. nicley done

Very good

I like i like i like...lol wow this is rly kewl...how r u lesat?? hope all is well ttyl.

Lissa

Wow....god ur poems man there just like really good i really like this one
lv claire
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I really like this one it has such emotion but it leaves you wondering if your ok....exalent! (i cant spell)
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