Wow.. Just wow...

A very well chosen title.

Wow.. it's... erm.. excellent. Fabulous use of words, great flow. It really grabbed me by the throated.

It was a very enoyable read. I think you have some serious talent here. Which you don't see often!

I love how there's so much meaning beneath the surface, dares the reader to wonder.

Also the end phrase was very fantastic. Awesome work.

Hey, keep it up. But I'm sure you will =)

Lotsaaa love
-xxx-

Throat... sorry not throated.. ah sorry forget about the typos, please :) haha

Stunning poem. The use of repetition gave a really great effect, almost seemed lyrical. Beautiful write, truely beautiful, the rhyme scheme never once seemed forced and the use of language was exquisite, amazing choice of words. Great stuff, 5/5 x

SWEET. Good job Noni. If only darkness wasn't so difficult for some to grasp. Keep it up, girl!

Beautiful words. All of your poetry has been a JOY to read, and this one is no different. Keep it up! PLEASE!

Rave!

Very nicely done!!!