A dream come true

by Ms.lovely   May 20, 2006


Baby boy you are like a dream come true
your like the perfect one for me
everyone could see that we were meant to be
you make me happier than I ever felt
since we met you've made my heart melt
I love you so much,i don't think you truly understand
if i needed one thing more is a hold of your hand
your kisses are so sweet and your hugs are so warm
in your arms i feel so welcomed and forever I will stay
every night I hope and pray that we will always be OK
but now everything is perfect,i don't think nothing could go wrong
Baby don't you know that your a dream come true?

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  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Only one comment that's negative, so I hope you don't mind, but double negative makes a positive.. the 2nd to last line should say 'anything' instead of 'nothing', and you are is abbreviated as 'you're', not 'your'.. However, I really really like the way you have made your subject sound like you're really really in love. It's great, and gives me hope. I really like it.. Worthy of a 5/5. Thank you. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Pepa

    OH MY!!! Marvelous work!! Loved it!! Wow, I can't even put into words how your poem made me feel. It was truly a blessing....because I am going through that right now but unfortunately for me I don't think this dream will last! He seems too good to be true! I have a poem on that if you would like to read it...."Perfect man even has flaws". Keep up the amazing work! GBU! Pepa

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