OH MY!!! Marvelous work!! Loved it!! Wow, I can't even put into words how your poem made me feel. It was truly a blessing....because I am going through that right now but unfortunately for me I don't think this dream will last! He seems too good to be true! I have a poem on that if you would like to read it...."Perfect man even has flaws". Keep up the amazing work! GBU! Pepa

Only one comment that's negative, so I hope you don't mind, but double negative makes a positive.. the 2nd to last line should say 'anything' instead of 'nothing', and you are is abbreviated as 'you're', not 'your'.. However, I really really like the way you have made your subject sound like you're really really in love. It's great, and gives me hope. I really like it.. Worthy of a 5/5. Thank you. xx