by MaSkEdSoUl May 20, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
What would life be like if there were no happy days? |
Wow!! Such a strong message!! great poem. |
Flow could have been a little better, but either way it was manificent, 5/5 |
by tyanna
Great job at getting the point across...the message was strong...Keep writting!!! 5/5 |
by Wallace
Nice poem, had a good meaning to it. Good job. |
by *Daniel94*
Great poem, i can learn from that, more words, more meaning |