You have been the source of my smiles, and the source of my cries,
You have been the warmth in my heart, and the fire in my eyes.

i like these lines lot , ya love is weird ,u have penned it beautifully .
thanks for ur comment really appreaciate it.

Take care
chavii.

Wow.. beautifuL! just breathtaking.. i too love those lines ::

You have been the source of my smiles, and the source of my cries,
You have been the warmth in my heart, and the fire in my eyes.

they are adorable! and sooo sweet! keep up the amazing writing!

Aww wow that was a weird love, and quite sad that you're cousins. It really touched me and the lines "You have been the source of my smiles, and the source of my cries,
You have been the warmth in my heart, and the fire in my eyes" were truly beautiful and sent shivers down my back, honestly!
I think it was an original write, which is hard to do in love.
It was a weird poem, but I liked it!!

Oh and another thing....calm down hunny, take a deep breath.....and shhhh. I've just read all the comments you left on my writes. I am totally flattered, happy, shocked and amazed by what you said. I'm sort of confused too, and am convinced you were reading someone elses work instead, not mine.
Either way, I'm so glad you liked them, I'll always appreciate a compliment, and it has encouraged me to keep writing.
You keep writing too!!

Wow that was a great poem i can so almost relate to it!!!!!!! great job :) loved it i realy did