Aww, for some reason i thought this was about ben til the end, great poem though, loved love loved it xxx

Oh wow, that was excellent, I loved it. I haven't seen the movie or read the book, and from the sound of that I'd probably cry in it heh heh. Great poem, excellent write, full of emotion/feeling =) xxx

Aww really sad but really great babe ily xx

Brilliant poem. Whenever i see the word 'pilgrim' i always think of the horse whisperer, for some reason, and it surpised me (in a good way) to find that it was about him!!! i love the film but it always makes me cry :P

beautifully written, you've really captured the torment and heartache. fab poem.

xXx

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! new poem *big smile*

Heyy Emma dear

It's been a while, but you haven't lost your touch, it's a brill peice but o-so-very-sad! I loved your words, your imagary:

Seeking refuge in darkness alone
Shadows engulf his soft brown eyes
A beautiful creature desperate for hope
Before the last flicker burns and dies.

WOOOOOOOOOOOW lol sorry Ihave had a lot of sugar but man, you have talent beyond your years well done =] *waits for more*

Jenn

*sob* ahhhhh i love that film. U did it justice emmaaaaaaaa well dun!! xx

...no i dont like the peom

I LOVE IT...its sooo good hun i love this line

Once dancing like spirited flames
Now dull with a hopeless stare.

ha and u say i have talent...look at ur poems...lol i hearts it babes

mwahhhh xoxoxox

Very nicely written I loved it like all of your other poems. The first and last stanzas were defiantly my favorites. But its all an amazing write like always. Never quite writing your a brilliant writer.

*> : PainOfOne * blaine

This is an awesome poem!! keep it up. 5/5

I have never read the book or seen the film. I guess im going to have now! lol Good poem.

This is quite inspirational. I love your poem. Good work, keep it up.

Awesome job! i love the poem. Interesting topic too. You write very well =]

Thoughtfully, carefully, and beautifully delivered....