by Poetically Speaking May 20, 2006
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
The soldier squared his shoulders, |
by Kaylee
This poem was really sad, I really like your soldier poems especially when I try and look for some really good ones. Your imagery only added to the set tone of the poem which did lift u p towards the end of it. A few lines did run a bit awkward like when your stanzas went from four lines to five such as: |