by Alissa May 20, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Dim with darkness now all around, |
by mossgirl19
An amazing dark write. Your rhyming here is great. Love the atmosphere, yes, it's hauntingly beautiful. |
by Nix
Atmosphere of this poem is amazing. You wrote it superbly. Rhyming is original and imagery is incredible. 5/5 |
by Michelle18
Wow amazing..this is one of my favorites of yours....i love it... |
by Corruption
Good poem thx for the comment but it aint that good lol well good job on this i like the rythme it was well done |
Great poem!!! it sounds like its about someone drowning, but im not really sure.. but everything flows :) thanks for the comment |