Comments : Dance With Me

  • 18 years ago

    by Katz

    Excelent poem, its so emotional and deep

  • 18 years ago

    by Denise Butler

    I can almost see myself dancing too, wow what an experience Tim, I feel as though I can put myself in your poems, like you are writing for all of us here, We can just step right into your words and live them. This is why you are my favorite writer on here. I love evrything you do. Denise

  • 18 years ago

    by Denise Butler

    Oh man, I meant everything. Sorry.

  • 18 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Very nice. This painted a very romantic picture.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa

    Awwww this is so beautifully written T, I knew you had'nt lost your touch for writing a good love poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Ooooh, I like this! Tim, you've really outdone yourself. The emotion in this is beautifully conveyed as is the passion!
    I really like the ending as well, makes for a wonderful piece!
    Love ya~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Tim, thank you very much for your kindness comment, i very appreciated myfriend, beautiful penned as always, so breathtaking yet beautiful expressive emotions. do take care myfriend, bert.

  • 18 years ago

    by nekell

    Very sweet poem!!!